RSMV, Comments?

[Klaien]

I made this (Unfinished) RSMV a long time ago, it isnt perfect at all, so dont blame me on that, It isnt HD aswell, sorry guys.
But here it is:
RSMV - Day 'n Nite, SmashVIGames

Or watch it here:


I hope u enjoy it!
Subscribers are really appreciated aswell

Thanks in advance,
//SmashVIGames (Klaien).

[Scream0013]

No offense, take this as constructive criticism, but I wouldn't even give it a 3/10. The places you're recording in have no relevance to the lyrics (they generally do or are at some awesome looking place) the lyrics aren't in sync and you should try using some effects (I recommend sony vegas) and slide transitions etc, don't give up though!