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    Need help with essay ^_^

    Well I still need to rewrite this essay at morning and everything is still a bit fuzzy so I think i would leave it here and I would be appreciated if someone would help me with spelling errors, bad sentences etc

    Essay was meant to be written my area so...

    Night and Day

    Area where I live is a really silent city called *X*X*X*
    In here the majority of population is elders, so you can imagine what pain it is to be out when they are nagging a bout everything what you do and if they aren't nagging they will take a deadly gaze towards you. Overall if you succeed getting away from them you will face another problem - there aren't anything to do in here during daytime. *X*X*X* is more like meant to people who play baseball, football or any other sports.
    BUT! Usually around 8-9:00 Pm stuff finally starts to happen when youth of our city will take over the downtown. There will be so many you can hang out with and talk to. Also there are sometimes few more experienced drivers who drift at the streets so you'll never get bored.
    And at Sunday and other weekdays don't differ so much, only that the most of stores are closed at Sunday.
    So yea - Night life differs a lot from the day life and I would gladly spend my day times sleeping and night awake.




    It is not a major essay, but meh.. It didn't need to be a novelty piece xD

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    The area where I live is a really silent city called *X*X*X*
    The majority of population here is older, so you can imagine what a pain it is to be out when they are nagging about everything you do. If they aren't nagging they'll look at you in a deathly gaze sending a chill through your spine. If you succeed in avoiding them, you will face another problem, there isn't much to do in here during daytime for people like myself. *X*X*X* is more angled towards people who play baseball, football or any other sport, but usually around 8 or 9 PM, downtown fills with youth and becomes much more lively. There are so many people hang out with and talk to at this time. Also there are sometimes few more experienced drivers who drift through the streets so you'll always be entertained.
    Weekdays aren't much different, only that the most of stores are closed Sunday.
    So yeah, night life here differs a lot from day life, I would gladly spend my day times sleeping and night awake.
    Hope this helps, I made a few grammar/spelling changes and switched a couple phrases.

    Also it sounds like you live in an area sort of like mine, minus the downtown drifting :P
    Last edited by Ciris; 09-06-2009 at 11:52 PM.

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    You've got like a paragraph there. What grade is this for? Do you have questions about your essay or are you trying to get someone else to do your homework?

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    Well my main language is not English so I wanted to get some help with it, but after 8 hours after posting I rewrote it and gave it to our teacher. But thanks Ciris, but you was too late :#

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    I think it is better if you will justify your essay. Then try to correct that in a three paragraph. Do not cut the paragraph of your essay.

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    I might want to encourage you to focus on the best essay writers - I regularly go to them for help, in light of the fact that main expert journalists work there who compose composing works like papers of extremely great on schedule and without counterfeiting. It is vital for me
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    top advice, thx

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