First signature attempts...

[ohmaigawd]

Hey
This is first thing I ever did in Photoshop (if you dont count simple reskins) so I know I'm still a big noob

First signature ever:



Render:
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Second one:


Render: [SPOILER][/SPOILER]

Please suggest me what should I improve to make it look atleast decent...

BTW I used same font on both sigs because I couldnt find a suitable font for second sig and I think it fits better on the first one

Comment please

UPDATE:

Hey, I played with C4Ds some more and this is what I came up with:



Its not finished yet because I want you to tell me what to improve
P.S.: I didnt find any suitable fonts for word "laiho"

[danbirk]

looks good if this is your first attempts

[Dobbs]

1st one looks good, nice and simple.. Just try to work on your text placement.
2nd one needs to have a bit more flow and the render needs to flow/blend with you background. And again your text placement.

Overall good for your first 2, keep it up.

[Grif]

Sigs are decent for the first 2, but the render pick on first one is amazing.

[alj03]

Thanks for that angel render!

1st one: Try and have text close to your focal point (that being the render) and try add some depth and more fx. C4D's could be useful and fun to use, play around with the blending options when using them.

2nd one: Again try and have the text close to your focal. Blending needs to be worked on as well. But very good for your first two, keep it up mate!

[Blinnk]

Really good for your first 2, much better thine. Just work on your flow, that always makes a sig look better.

Gj, hope to see some more work.

[ohmaigawd]

Thanks for all your comments!

... what is fx? Never heard that before...

I also dont know if im using C4Ds the right way - I download the pic of C4D and place it in my picture. Is that the right way?
C4D I used: dKazn's Gallery

[Grif]

The use of C4D is somewhat correct, but you would want to, lets say duplicate the layer a few times, add some smudging, erasing, blending options and suchto different layers of the same C4D to have more "awesome" feel to it, in my opinion. Rather than just smacking the C4D in the pic ;>

[ohmaigawd]

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