Originally Posted by
Narudan
i think you should have erased more of the c4d's and less pen tooling, but the pen tooling itself is nice and well done ( some edges, though)
I see the Lightsorce behind her, but it doesn't overlay her, you could have added more depth here, also the render doesn't blend so good on the right side (its a little squashed and choppy, isn't it?)
Bigger sigs is the answer, try 400*150, its alot easier.
Text: Gradient overlay >_<
Makes the text stand out too much, and in combination with the outerglow its too bright, i prefer(sure you noticed^^) plain white/black text.
sorry for any grammar/spelling mistakes, wrote that quite quickly g2g now ^_°
oh, and add depth by better light/shadows (set a white/black brush on overlay ~50%)