first machinima of wow

[ziddestroyer]

my friend started making a machinima, and got lazy more or less, but anywayz, i want to know what you guys think, any suggestions on what to do such as longer shorter, different angle shots. Preferable not 'your animation sucks' because i've alredy told him that 50 times, he's getting better.....

anyway
([ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-490_dpumY"]YouTube- twinks0.mp4[/ame])
[YT]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-490_dpumY[/YT]

views?

thanks

[Zeroi9]

Yea, "your friend."

Well, I guess it was OK for your first time.

[ziddestroyer]

it seriously is a friends machinima, needs intro music, animation is shit and i presonaly think it's a pile of crap and needs a complete script re-write, also longer.

if it was mine that would of happened, but thanks for ur support anyway

[Kopleff]

creative for first time