My Anime/Action Cartoons Collection (I need some tips)

[wickermanz]

I'd like some constructive critism, even just "YOUR ANIMATIONS ARE SHIT BECAUSE.." or "THAT WAS SO BORING, YOU SHOULD HAVE..." thanks



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M5wUCaCSoBE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-XIjfqQTKM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ePHxdcYVE48
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D1mkQi8VtYQ

[HI5]

hmm... well... I'd rly like to say smth nice about it as obviously you've put some effort into it, but it's pretty boring :<
animation is not hurting eyes but besides that it was... no idea actually what it was :C maybe someone will like it (someone stoned probably ) but as for me it was pretty lame, sorry :<
If it meant to be funny you should work some on better jokes, and probably you should also use your own voice as listening voice synthesizers isn't the most pleasing thing. (also the music in bg was to loud, I've had problems to understand some dialogues cause of that).

about the graphics (this is graphic section after all ) as I already said animation wasn't eye hurting, but also not so special (5.8/10 tho) but if you work some on dialogues this animation will be more then enough to make good background for them.

As for start these videos aint that bad (I've seen much much worse) so if you keep working on it you can actually make it rly good

so don't give up and good luck with it

[wickermanz]

Thanks for the advise HI5, I tried making it a bit better this time. What do you think? one is just a video to annoy the living hell out of wow players.

Planet Rotating Water Vehicile - YouTube
How to not get kicked from raid finder in World of Warcraft - YouTube
RABBIT FUN ULTRA TIME! - YouTube

[HI5]

Well, animation seem to be better actually, especially on the rabbits video it's actually pretty good, it even made me smile for a moment, but jokes still aren't very best, at least they don't fit my sense of humor (not sure how other ppl feel about it)

You could try to remake some older jokes (especially written only jokes) it could be actually cool to see some good old jokes with animation

[Reflection]

I'm sorry but: Go Animate! An Animation Revolution - YouTube

I agree with HI5. The films are decent enough, but the automated voice kinda ruin them for me. Keep working on them and listen to what HI5 said!